Shoot 10

[Janice Dickinson]

ADVERTISING - SHOOT 10

You were sent out to get jobs with any company of your choosing, and you were to represent their products. Well the verdict is in and this is what your judges had to say about all your hard work in the marketing world.

[Doutzen Kroes]

GEMMA

PHOTOSHOOT 10-Advertising Companies



A wedding is a time where you symbolize your love for someone and your joined for life with the love of your life. It's a beautifull ceremony so of course you need to look and feel stunning for your wedding. Swarovski's Bridal collection contains sparkling and ravishing jewelry that will enrich your appearance and make you beautiful for your wedding. The wedding will be something you will never forget and you will hold in your heart.

Doutzen: Okay so I have a bit of positive and negative feedback Gemma love. I think this is very pretty and fantasy, princess type of shot that I love, On the other hand you seem washed out in all that white and it almost takes away from the quality of the shot. Maybe if it had been bigger that wouldnt be happening. Overall I think this is pretty and it works

Bret: Hmmm, well Gemma, I suppose I like this. I think it's an artistic shot and the advertisement as well as the commercial speech is really good but I'm just not super impressed. I really don't know why. I was hoping to be knocked off my chair here with these advertisement's but nothing is really grabbing my attention strongly right now. I must be grumpy.


Claudia: I dont know Gemma, I'm not loving this...you look kinda washed out and your script was kind of winded. Sorry...I think Im grumpy like Brett

[Janice Dickinson]

Bianca

~ Advertising Companies ~

Missoni Silk Gowns. Molto bold color and pattern in the best Italian fabrics. The elegance you deserve. The beauty you desire.

Doutzen: This is a very interesting shot. When I first saw this I thought water nymph.. Thats what it reminds me of.. Your eyes are intense and I like the shot, but I wouldnt have really known what you were selling if I hadnt read the description. I wish we could see more of the dress. Overall not bad

Bret: Bianca, this is a nice shot of you, I think you look stunning although the silk gown that you are advertising, is not as noticeable as I would like it be. Good commercial script and a fabulous picture though.


Claudia: Bianca, Im not loving this..you look greasy and like Doutzen, I would have had no clue what you were selling without the script.

[Janice Dickinson]

Flavia

Cesare Paciotti shoes will leave you head over heels in love. They are the most comfortable shoes you will ever put on and at a fraction of the cost of other big name designers. Don't let your feet down, treat them to a pair of Paciotti's today.

Doutzen: I LOVE THIS!.. You remind me of Audrey Hepburn for some reason, and those legs are killer. The pose is so unique and artsy, and you are very flexible indeed. It definetely makes my attention go right to the shoes and I know that looking at this million of women are rushing out to own a pair, if they think their legs might look like yours.. Good Job

Bret: This is great Flavia. Best of the bunch so far. You shoes are what you are selling here and you they pop out right away. You're pose is unique, and you did good with your script, not too wordy, not to brief. Great job!


Claudia: Flavia, this is awesome!! You look gorgeous, your pose is fun and your script just makes it that much better...Im buying what you are selling

[Janice Dickinson]

Alessandra

Armani Exchange is geared towards younger customers and features urban style, especially T-shirts, jeans, polos, and sports coats. Mix and match your favorite separates and create a unique fashion sense geared to your lifestyle. Belted sport coats and slacks coupled with "just right" accessories, can make any wardrobe upbeat. Armani Exchange is affordable and has clothing that is versatile and contemporary. If you want to look hip and "in style", then Armani Exchange has just what you're looking for.

Bret: This is interesting Alessandra. I think you look great in your advertisement and I like the script, although I think it is a tad too wordy. The only thing that I'm not really getting here is, are you selling the whole ensemble? If so then that is fine, it's like a "GAP" advertisement then, but it would be nice if it were a bit brighter and you really showed off the clothing to the best of your ability. Lighting helps achieve that.


Claudia: Ale, Im not feeling this. The photo is dark and boring, and your script didnt really get my attention either. Sorry

Doutzen: I really like the look of this, it is a bit dark and I guess I wouldnt really have known too much what this was selling and I agree with Bret its because the fact that the shot is dark and there fore not showing off the clothes like it should be..

[Janice Dickinson]

Vlada

When I was a little girl, I liked to pretend I was a princess. And I can't say that much has changed. That's why love Jill, the new scent by Jill Stewart. This perfume leaves you smelling light, clean and feminine the whole day through. Some girls need to wait for their Prince Charming to become a princess. All I need is Jill.

Doutzen: Wow Vlada, this is beautiful.. Your eyes are so big , bright and innocent, and you really have this softness and grace to you.. as if you were royalty.. I know I want to feel graceful and delicate and I would buy this perfume after seeing this ad. Great Job Love

Bret: I hate to say I'm bored, but frankly, I'm bored... I can sit here and tell you all night how beautiful you are and you as well as the rest of these ladies can agree that you are all stunning but for me this is just ho-hum. I can see the product, and your script is fine. I just wish it was a bit more eye catching and wowing. I don't know why I'm so frustrated with these tonight. Vlada, you look beautiful. I just don't know if you can just have a head shot and a bottle of perfume and really make it sell that way. I actually I think the script is better then the Advertisement shot at this point. It's just a pretty shot with a bottle of perfume. Hmmm...


Claudia: Vlada, I love this...you are stunning and I love your script. It all works well together, and like Flavia...Im buying what you're selling. Good job.

[Travis Fimmel]

Sorry Judges. It was hard for me to find a good ad that I can write a script for. Besides I'm not very creative. Thanks anyway Judges.

[Eugen Bauder]

OH WOW, thank you judges. I was so worried about impressing you on both parts of the challenge so I'm very very happy that I got the job done!!
Great job ladies. Bianca, your eyes and lips are totally WOW

[Travis Fimmel]

Yes I loved Bianca's picture! She looks gorgeous.

[Hilary]

Thanks Gemma and Flavia - I love it too, but I guess I just can't impress the judges anymore...oh well.

[Hilary]

"Bianca, Im not loving this..you look greasy and like Doutzen, I would have had no clue what you were selling without the script."

Greasy??? Um it's called water....and I guess I thought that was the whole point of the script - to point out the product.

[Claudia]

Um, it doesn't matter what it is (water, grease, whatever)...just my opinion of it

Yes, that is what your script is for...and again..its only my opinion here...but, in my opinion, your script didn't go with the picture.

[Hilary]

Jun 4, 2008 21:06:17 GMT -5 Claudia said:

Um, it doesn't matter what it is (water, grease, whatever)...just my opinion of it

Yes, that is what your script is for...and again..its only my opinion here...but, in my opinion, your script didn't go with the picture.

Yes, I got that it was your opinion....and I may not be great at writing scripts, but that IS what the ad was for.

[Janice Dickinson]

It was for greasy, watery hair? I totally missed that... ;D

[Hilary]

You were probably too busy looking at my eyes - you need to pay closer attention.